The Bad Girls of Manderley by Sandra Ardoin

When I was about thirteen I strolled with my friends along the sidewalks of our downtown square. We stopped inside the tiny record shop to look around. While my companions riffled through the 45s looking for the latest tunes, I made a beeline for a metal book rack propped against a wall. Hmmm…what did I want to read? I picked up a book I’d never heard of and scanned the back cover.

Thus began my introduction to two of my favorite fictional bad girls: Rebecca de Winter and Mrs. Danvers.

“Last night I dreamt I went to Manderley again.” To me, Daphne du Maurier 200px-DaphneDuMaurier_Rebecca_firstcreated one of the best opening lines of a novel when she began Rebecca. Even in its vagueness, it promises an intriguing story. What or where is Manderley? Why did the narrator dream of the place? Why would she go back again?

Of course, it is also interesting that, throughout the book, the heroine/narrator is never given a first name, yet the villain in the story gets the title.

We never actually meet Rebecca when she’s alive, but that’s the thing that makes her such a fascinating villain to me. Long after her death, she held tremendous power over people. With the exception of her husband, Maxim de Winter, nearly everyone believed she was an angel. But she haunted Max. It wasn’t until her body was discovered lying in her sunken boat that the threads of her well-crafted charm began to unravel.

Goal, motivation, and conflict are preached over and over to writers creating their heroes and heroines. But villains need that GMC, too. Without it, they’re flat, cardboard caricatures like many of those in a B-movie detective story. Readers must know why the characters do what they do.

In the backstory, Rebecca wants to be mistress of Manderley (goal) because the position comes with power, money and respect (motivation), but illness threatens everything she has worked to achieve, including her courage (conflict), so she discovers a way to reach a quick end and ruin her husband in the process. That’s cold.

Rebecca possesses something else a villain needs—humanity. It gives them that 3-D effect and makes them believable. Her weakness—fear over physical suffering and a lingering frailty—is what makes her that well-rounded character. Once we discover the reason for her final action, we sympathize with and despise her at the same time.

Rebecca was selfish, manipulating, adulterous, conniving…on and on, but we also see a softer side through Mrs. Danvers and Jack Favell. Both loved and defended her. No one loved Rebecca better than Mrs. Danvers, the woman who cared for her in life and guarded her secrets in death. But even Danny didn’t know the one secret Rebecca kept to herself.

Mrs. Danvers did her best to see that Rebecca’s memory remained alive. She intimidated Wife Number Two through her subtle (and not-so-subtle) remarks. It wasn’t hard, since WNT was a mouse—at least in the beginning. I can’t blame WNT, though. She was dealing with one spooky and vengeful woman.

And lest you think our hero, Maxim, has clean hands, think again. While the reader doesn’t look at him as a villain—only a victim of his wife’s manipulation and cruelty—Rebecca’s final evil deed took away his claim to innocence. As a result, the material possession that meant the most to him—the reason that drove him to put up with her for so long—came to ruin.

And the ashes blew towards us with the salt wind from the sea. With that last line, so ends the Bad Girls of Manderley.

Do you have a favorite villain whose character repels you while their circumstance raises a bit of sympathy?

ssandraSandra Ardoin writes inspirational historical romances with stalwart heroes who melt the hearts of her strong, sometimes unconventional, heroines. Her goal is to entertain the reader with a gripping story while revealing the depth of God’s love and forgiveness.

She blogs at and is the Wednesday hostess on the Seriously Write blog. You’ll also find her on Facebook, Twitter, Google+, and Goodreads. And don’t forget to check out Sandy’s Pinterest boards where she mixes writing fun with personal fun. She’s represented by Diana Flegal of Hartline Literary Agency.

Sandy is the married mother of a young adult. She enjoys reading, country music, and gardening in her rocky North Carolina soil.

8 thoughts on “The Bad Girls of Manderley by Sandra Ardoin

  1. Pingback: Villains: Can You Ever Get Enough of Them? | Sandra Ardoin

  2. This summer I watched a fantastic Korean tv drama called “I Hear Your Voice.” It’s part courtroom drama, part thriller, and part romantic comedy with a touch of fantasy thrown in. The villain was something else. He was terrifying and his reasoning was so warped. But as we got to know him and the circumstances and choices that led to him becoming a murderer with nothing to lose, you couldn’t help but sympathize with his past. And he was so driven to justify his choices to himself that he set out to force the hero into similar circumstances, expecting that he would make the same decisions. And the hero wrestles with the same situation as you mentioned above that Maxim struggles with – that returning evil with evil takes away your claim to innocence.

    If you don’t mind subtitles, I highly recommend you try watching “I Hear Your Voice.” I believe you can watch the entire series (20 episodes) online for free at “The legal drama centers around Jang Hye Sung, a brazen, sharp-tongued female attorney who says everything that comes to her mind with no filter. When she gets to the point in her career where it’s hard to muster up any enthusiasm for her work, she teams up with the serious Cha Kwan Woo, a passionate public defender, and Park Soo Ha, a 19-year-old with a special ability to hear people’s inner thoughts. Together, they also must face a killer with a personal vendetta that entwines all of their lives. Can they bring the dangerous man to justice?”

    • That show sounds interesting. I’ve never heard of it, but I’ll have to look it up. It’s always best when we can sympathize with the villain, isn’t it? They’re so much more real to us when we can find some reason to relate them to our own lives.

      So glad you read the post and presented us with a villain who really affected you!

      • I watch a lot of Asian dramas – they are generally cleaner than US television and have a set story in so many episodes instead of season after season of never-endingness. But I have been known to complain once or twice about the villains – “can’t there be just one drama where they don’t make me sympathize for the villain halfway through! I was enjoying despising him!”. lol 😀

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